Date: Apr 24, 2010 08:20 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen: Party Foul
well, I think we are way past Christmas and New Year holidays... I think we're already past Easter :P ... so, you know, you could.. well, just take pity on one faithful reader and post the next chap ;) (hugs)
Date: Feb 22, 2010 06:28 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen: Party Foul
i love it plz update




[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2010 08:36 AM Title: Chapter Two: Under Protest
when are u going to update
Date: Feb 12, 2010 03:10 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen: Party Foul
More? Please?




[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2009 11:30 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen: Party Foul
You do a really good job with your side characters (like Rosemary) and use them well to show off different sides of your main characters. 8-)




[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2009 09:03 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen: Busted
Denial, how ingrained you can be. Peter's confusion at the whole thing with Ethan works really well with everything you've set up so far.
I also have to say that I love how Edward lets him get away with stuff without telling Donna but still demands to know and hands out punishments if it's bad enough.




[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2009 03:56 PM Title: Chapter Twelve: News For Me
Interesting turn you're taking. I look forward to seeing where it goes.




[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2009 04:09 AM Title: Chapter Eight: Madness
You have me really tied up in this story now. I hate that I have to put off reading more.




[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2009 03:02 AM Title: Chapter Six: And Confusion Was Felt By All
Okay, serious props for making the MythBuster's joke about tin foil and telepathy! You have the rare gift of writing something that can be both poinant and funny and not seem trite. Go you!




[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2009 01:24 AM Title: Chapter Three: Hot and Steamy (But Not Really)
I think I like Ethan better than Peter right now. Maybe I'm just too weird myself. 8-D




[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2009 12:59 AM Title: Chapter Two: Under Protest
Ethan/Peter interactions are shaping up to be very amusing. I also like that you've given Peter's friends such varied opinions and perspectives on Ethan so we get to see a slightly more three dimensional image now rather than when Peter sees enough of Ethan for that.




[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2009 12:34 AM Title: Chapter One: My Partner the Psycho
I have so many different ideas of what might actually be going on with Ethan. I like that you are connecting back to the trauma Peter has been through too. Looking forward to reading more.




[Report This]Date: Oct 15, 2009 09:26 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen: Party Foul
great. waitng for update...recovered your chapters yet?
Author's Response: My wonderful father just ordered me a part to put my old hardrive into my new computer, now he just needs to get a cable fore it so...perhaps soon I will get to finish up the next chapter? *crosses fingers*
Date: Sep 28, 2009 10:35 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen: Party Foul
I love this Story! I hope you update soon, thanks!
Date: Sep 19, 2009 11:34 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen: Party Foul
This story is so good, I can't wait for the next chapter.